ext_96363: by me (DAO ~ Grey Warden)
ayascythe.livejournal.com ([identity profile] ayascythe.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] caramelsilver 2010-03-07 08:23 am (UTC)

I guess it's okay as long as it doesn't happen all the time and the scene in its entirety is still understandable.
You could also mark it as a flashback by writing it in italics. That is done very often.

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