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I think I'm just going to post my Cabaret fic here, and then, if any of you read it, would you just point out mistakes and weird passages?

fic: Let the Drums Keep on Playing

Let the Drums Keep on Playing
- by caramelsilver
Because somehow she always ended up back with him, older and wiser and with a broken heart.
Cabaret; Sally Bowles, the Emcee; pg; 3000 words

( Let the Drums Keep on Playing )