Yay, thank you! Dialogue is definitely not my strong suit, so I'm glad it worked. Sometimes I get all caught up in imagery and write a fic, and realize the characters haven't said a word throughout. XD

(The funny thing is, I usually don't even write het, but girl!Ed/Peter is even more irresistible than Edmund/Peter. :D WHICH IS PRETTY IRRESISTIBLE AS WELL. In conclusion: I am easy for new pairings. XD)