Drabble: Breathing Air [100 words]

[caramelsilver]

Title: Breathing Air
Rating: G
Word count: 100 words
Summary:  He feel it when he breathes.
Author's Note: Response to Weekly Challenge #12 (Sweet) at   justkingedmund 
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

 

He felt it in his bones whenever he went out. The feeling of a different earth beneath his feet and a different air he breathed in. The air here was dirtier, coarse, and it burned in his lungs. He was tempted to pick up smoking just to have a reason to feel like that. 

He felt it immediately. He was back in Narnia again. The dirty fumes of the train station dissolved and the sweet fragrance of the Narnian air replaced it. He didn't have to look around; he could feel it and he could smell it. He was home. 

 

Comments

[ivrien.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was lovely! It makes perfect sense to me; I can almost smell the difference between the air in Narnia and the air in our world. I really liked it!

[caramelsilver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I always thought that the air between England and Narnia would be different. It's described in the books of how the air made them older and stronger, I would think that they could feel the difference=)