Drabble: At the Demand of the Sun [100 words]

[caramelsilver]

Title: At the Demand of the Sun
Rating: G
Word count: 100 words
Summary:  Slowly, like the fog disappearing at the demand of the sun, she knew where she was.

For a moment she was confused. She had no idea of where she was and panic gripped her heart. Then the darkness cleared and she could see her siblings beside her. She sighed in relief. Looking over the beautiful beach and the sparkling water, there was a whisper in the back of her mind saying: Susan, you've been here before.

They played in the water and slowly, like the fog disappearing at the demand of the sun, she knew where she was. How could she ever forget? Why didn't she know immediately? She was back in Narnia where she belonged.

Comments

[sofisticat.livejournal.com]

I loved this one, too.

[caramelsilver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! There's one more. I'm really happy with this one. For some reason Susan is always the one I find easiest to write=)

[sofisticat.livejournal.com]

Maybe because she's easier to relate to?
And I just discoverd that you have a new layout. Beautiful!

[caramelsilver.livejournal.com]

Yeah, she's the more... human? She makes mistakes and she doubts and I just find it easy to go into her head.

Thank you! I really really like the new layout. I think I've finally found one I can stick with=)

[sofisticat.livejournal.com]

Yes, that's what I thought, too. Her imperfection makes her easier to identify with ...

[vagabond-pixie.livejournal.com]

Perfect!! It explains so much, and I love this one. Brava my dear

[caramelsilver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Susan, for some reason, is SO easy to write! I also think this one is my favorite of all the four.