I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT! I WORKED REALLY HARD ON THIS AND I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT.
I've been toying with the idea of Edmund as a ghost for a long time, and the first scene just came to me. I knew I had to write it, and I was kind of nervous that it would be too... original and that you wouldn't like it. But it does have Susan and Edmund, and I, at least, think they are being awesome.
I tried incorporating as much as you wanted, while adding my own. I don't know if you could tell, but I really fell in love with the imagery of Edmund, always rumpled and constantly smoking. I can picture it perfectly in my mind, you see, and tried my hardest to convey that in the text.
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on 2010-05-31 09:29 pm (UTC)I've been toying with the idea of Edmund as a ghost for a long time, and the first scene just came to me. I knew I had to write it, and I was kind of nervous that it would be too... original and that you wouldn't like it. But it does have Susan and Edmund, and I, at least, think they are being awesome.
I tried incorporating as much as you wanted, while adding my own. I don't know if you could tell, but I really fell in love with the imagery of Edmund, always rumpled and constantly smoking. I can picture it perfectly in my mind, you see, and tried my hardest to convey that in the text.
&hearts &hearts so happy that you liked it.