Original Fiction: Each Mirroring the Other

I've written original fiction. I am so surprised at myself you have no idea. And it's probably not so good, and I have no idea how much sense it'll make to people who are not in my head but... I'm gonna post it here anyway.

It's written for this prompt over at The Fall Fandom Free-for-All: Fic: Original Fiction. Something involving a BFF dynamic, especially if there are guns, bad guys, awesome gadgets or explosions. M/M, M/F or F/F are all fine, and I don't mind if the pair remains friends or ends up together.

Title: Each Mirroring the Other
Author. Caroline Hillestad aka caramelsilver

Excerpt: "How are we going to get out?" Lilly asked. Though the street was empty, she kept her voice low.

"We leave," Jack said with a shrug.

"How? He got people everywhere!"

"We steal a car and we leave. We hop a train and we leave. We catch a bus and we-"

"-leave,"


( Sleeping. She had always loved sleeping. It was the one place where no one could get her and harm her. A place that was just hers and nobody could touch it with their dirty hands and taint it.  )

I totally think I'll write more. Now tell me what you think. Is it understandable, or just a jumble and wtf is this C?