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[caramelsilver]

Who wants to beta/ look at/ RIP APART! my narniaexchange fic? And when I say rip apart, I truly mean it. It's a rough draft at most, and some parts really truly suck, and some sentences are horrible. But then there are some parts I really like. So I need to know if the entire thing fit together, as it's very choppy, and if... yeah, just look, critique, and rip it apart please?

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[han-corrupted.livejournal.com]

I'm volunteering! :D

[caramelsilver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I've sent you the fic. Be brutally honest, my friend :)

[han-corrupted.livejournal.com]

haha Will do, my friend! :D Give me a few hours (need to get some sleep first) and then we'll discuss. :) <3

[13oct.livejournal.com]

I've been thinking about you. Hope you and your family are all safe and sound.

[caramelsilver.livejournal.com]

I'm fine, and everyone I know is fine, as far as I know. But I'm going around feeling totally nauseous, and everything is just so crazy. I cannot believe this happened. We actually heard the blast! I live forty minutes away from Oslo and we heard it! We thought it was thunder!

I'm... I'm praying and checking the news.

Thank you so much for your concern :)